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This week’s question: What writing device or trick most irritates you when reading a book? For example, if an author employs an omnipotent narrator that is sometimes considered bad form.
There are a few things that bother me when I read a book. Some make me want to read back to make sure that just happened, and sometimes I’m pretty sure I read something similar (or exactly the same thing) happened in another book I read.
- Characters who fall in love almost instantly. I mean, there’s no build-up and suddenly they exchange “I love yous” and as a reader that makes me wonder how I missed it. When did they start falling in love? And why do they love each other? They only just met.
- The complete opposite: characters who hate each other and end up falling in love. If executed well, this can make for an interesting love story, but really, I’ve read a lot of books where it’s obvious that the two of them are going to end up together and they just can’t seem to get along. And then at one point in the book, suddenly they realise they love the other person. Well, duh.
What writing devices bother you when reading a book? What do you think of books where characters fall in love instantly? Or characters who can’t stand to be around each other until they realise they’re in love with each other?
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Insta-love is the number one answer!
Hmm I quite like it when the characters genuinely can’t stand each-other for a specific founded reason and then they end up with each-other because they slowly fall for each-other as they realise that they aren’t as horrible as they thought. It isn’t boring because there’s a change from the beginning of the story to the end of the story. They didn’t like each-other from the start so watching them fall for each-other is thrilling.
Unless it’s done horribly. Like when the girl hates the guy because he is truly an ass to her for no reason then she spends the first half of the book trying to convince us (And herself) that she can’t stand him. Yet he is so hot she can’t stop thinking about him. And yet she is always thinking about him. That is seriously annoying.
I also get tired of the “Does he like me or doesn’t he?” drama when it’s dragged on for too long and it’s obvious he likes her yet she is blind. And probably has no self confidence because she always thinks she’s not as beautiful as the other girls that hang around him. Grow a pair woman! And stop judging yourself! Grrrrr. Annoying.
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Hey Miss J,
Thanks for your comment. I agree that if this is executed well, it’s quite entertaining! I like it when two characters who really don’t like each other at the start end up falling in love.
But, like you mentioned, if it’s done horribly, it could have the opposite effect. There has to be a reason for them to love each other. It’s okay if they don’t realise it at first, but I don’t want it to be too random. Like you said, if the guy acts like an ass (especially to her) and the girl ‘hates’ him but she can’t stop thinking about him, it seems a bit silly, unless there’s a very good reason for this behaviour.
Oh, I agree with the insta love thing so annoying! I even wrote a whoel post on it at me blog today.
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Hi!
Thanks for your comment!
I agree! I like a slow (but not-too-slow) build-up. I want to be able to feel the two characters fall in love so that when they do, it makes sense to me as a reader as well.
Insta-love seems to be the most talked about today! hate it too! :)
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Hi Alyssa!
Thanks for your comment.
Ha, I noticed that, too! I don’t think it’s good to have two characters fall in love when the reader hasn’t gotten the chance to get to know the two characters yet. It needs to make sense to me as a reader as well.
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